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Good:
- The character models are quite attractive, I want to fuck them all
- The music is absolutely killer.
- Story is interesting and seems unique so far
- Some of the animations are top notch (like the night with Sr. Lexi)

Should Improve:
- English isn't your first language is it? I think some of the wording is confusing or awkward, it would probably be a good idea to have someone reword the english for you. An example: other characters sometimes refer to the main character as "it" instead of "he"
- Some of the animations are still pretty rough and awkward
-I wish there were more small chested girls.

(+1)

I'm from Spain .. so it's still complicated for me.

I'm working on the translation, I'm looking for someone to help me a bit with that ...

Animations:

I'm working on that .. as I say, it's a "demo" and there are still characters to integrate ...

Thanks for the criticism!

Hey, I'm not from Spain, but I know your spanish is similar to spanish in Mexico where I'm from. I can probably help out in this area until you find someone more permanent. Either way I can definitely proofread if needed. 

Hey, dude, podrรญas unirte a mi discord? 

No pude encontrar la pagina, me puedes mandar una solicitud? Mi usuario es Hansung Jinsung#4465

Dude, te envie solicitud, soy Natch#5418, pero no me haz aceptado

Hello, I enjoyed the game and would like to help with the translations. I speak fluent and natural english. I would be able to take the current text and make it sound more natural. I can also do that with future text. I would love to help you and be apart of helping make this.