I like the game. It was kind of hard at times but I took it as it being challenging.
The thing with us taking the enemies apart for repair parts and getting to pick new skills and new enhancements after each kill was really cool! I loved that.
Some observations and suggestions: I saw some people mentioning the chickens/hornets and I agree, they look a bit out of place, I think you could just change them to some other monster that looks like a cyborg/robot and put them in some sort of training area. I think they help a bit with grinding so the battles are a bit easier so I think you shouldn't take them off, but maybe make them accessible in another map just for the grinders! ^^
I would have liked it also if the game had some stuff to interact with. Like with the objects you put in the maps (the well in Vending Village for example) and with the houses (even if just to say we can't enter them).
I think that some sort of introduction to what's going on right at the beginning and some sort of tutorial for the players would have been helpful too, especially about the enhancements, I only realize I could equip stuff in the enhance menu when I was already 20 minutes in the game.. lol And I also didn't really realize I was getting equipment stuff from the people I killed right away.. xD
Overall: I really liked the game, it was fun. But. My only real issue with the game was with the text really. I noticed a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes.. Some sentences just didn't make any sense.
You should get someone to proofread your text if your english isn't very good because if players can understand what's going on they'll be even more into the game.
I think the game has a lot of potential and what I could understand from the story made me think that it can be good too.
PS: There was some foreign symbols in the dialogue when you interact with one of the newborns in the cemetery, you should fix that xD
Anyway. Good luck with the contest and keep it up! I definitely want to see what else you have planned for this game! ^^