The gameplay took me a little while to figure out. Since there wasn't much strategy I could apply, it felt a bit tedious and frustrating, especially in the Weaver level.
I really appreciated the story and connected with its themes. It was great to hear your perspective on the issues you explored. Thanks. :) Also, I like how your writing sounded very personal yet wasn't alienating at all. It made me think and reflect.
A small issue: I think there could've been a smoother transition when progressing to the next level to distinguish that event from dying.