Woah. Really nice story and cute art. I love the vibrant colors you chose for the town, and how easily a couple of "wrong" decisions could end your run. The branching path is cool, especially the fact that you rarely have to backtrack to the station.
Took me a couple of tries to get a run that visits all the areas. Is there an ending in which I find my place in the town, and get settled somewhere? I'd hate to miss out on something you put in but I also don't want to just brute force my way through.