Dylan/cathardigan from Neophyte here. I personally really loved the dialogue in this one. It's very prosaic and interesting. And the way the characters talked was very intriguing! I'd love to hear a soundtrack in this one because it would add so much atmosphere to it. Right now it's reminding me of Dune, and the character designs aid in that i think. Also, the protag character design is awesome. Like, build a game around that dude.