Hi Matt,
Thank you so much. Some Twine hacking would really be appreciated! I want to learn more html, but that "unexpected error" drove me nuts for hours. I fiddled with it, read documentation, tried changing the story format, tried different browsers, but in the end I ran out of time... If you can help me make this playable without having to manually remake the whole thing in another format/syntax, that'd be awesome. :)