Just played through chapter 16. And I gotta say: Big big props for this one!
A lot happened, it was well written, tense, and it came to a really good conclusion.
Thank you a lot for not leaving this chapter on a cliffhanger. I have rarely put a non-finished story down so satisfied with it. Whether game, book or film.
Very much looking forward to more, but for now: Very well done, this is a work to be proud of! *thumbsup*