Well, seeing that the one issue I had got fixed, I can safely say the game's fairly interesting. not bad for a first try. I'd suggest putting in some lore within the game about Haru prior to her accident. That would allow you to create a normal and good ending where you have to find all the lore to unlock the good ending. That's my two cents anyways.
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