Good job. Still one of the best VNGames.
I found a story script mistake. Katherine mentions his mothers murder in the morning before he goes to see the 1st murder crime scene. He then tells Sarah about his mother while having a coffee with her. He then feels bad about telling Sarah before Kat about his mothers murder, but Kat had already mentioned it. This is when MC and Kat go to the cinema for the 1st time.