Best VN I've played storywise. Just perfect. Also nice job with the music. Sounds weren't that great, but can live without them.
One oddity I noticed on my second run was that even if I didn't have sex with Naomi at the gym, she says to Carol that Sydney saw MC and her doing it there when she talks to Carol that Sydney knows about them.
Also, some grammar stuff seem to be wrong. Like there's lot of "Haven't not got" style of texts, which should be either "Haven't got" or "Have not got". Though English isn't my first language so I might be wrong about those. Either way, great job =).