Things I enjoyed
- String and Piano samples appear to be fairly high quality, so good choice with those!
- The whole thing gives an interesting feeling of stillness, I think this is because of the instruments chosen? The long reverb also helps.
Things I didn’t enjoy
- The interactions between the piano and the strings were kind of nonexistent, most of the time it seemed like they were playing the same instrument.
- Melody meanders and twists in ways that I can’t really follow/remember. I had a music teacher who once told me “you can think of music as a pattern that changes over time”, so keeping that in mind would probably help your music overall.
From reading your description it looks like you’re just starting out in music, so sorry if I was harsh! You did good for where you’re at, so keep trucking along!