The evolution of the orchestration works very well here, and the presentation of the melody benefits from a good instrumental choice which emphasizes it. On the other hand, I found myself humming the music in shifted octave and fifth, like a musical canon in 4 voices (octave, fifth and fifth + octave), and I could not resist the temptation to make it for real. So I realized the canon with Audacity (I hope you will not feel offended : the counterpoint is my cute sin) ^^ "Due to the structure of the music and the purety of the melody, it worked without any modification of the original file (with a little sound transformation because of the octaviation and fifth). Interesting to see the possibilities left by such an immersive composition. If you're curious to listen to the result (this music obviously belongs to you and which I will delete from my cloud as soon as the voting period is over or if you ask me to do so before): http://www.yazorius.com/canon.mp3. Whatever, your music in its original version is really good, and as you have probably already understood, I liked it a lot ^_^
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Canon concept sounds really interesting!
Guess the limitation of process of editing and deforming wave sample made some pretty weird disharmony, but you can download source file - "Unforgotten Trek.it" is impulse tracker format, with all samples/intruments, and you should have been able to edit it in all modern music tracker editor program - I used OpenMPT, but others will be fine too (Milky Tracker works).
Also, I wrote in description, that you are allowed to edit music file, in fact, I encourage it!
And for legal notes, I added licence, which is now CC-By-SA (you can modify, share, even use commercionally, if you keep original authors name and keep this licence ^_^)