I like it and I realized that there is no voting category as "Idea" or similar, and this make me thinking - what is really game jam about? Is it about our creativity and speaking about something, or is it about creating a piece of code that is fun to play? Because if second, then we should all make shooters! Everybody loves to shoot :D
To be honest - my game is also pretty far from topic, and more "gameplay" thingy, despite my first ideas. But I very much like you're approach and I'm happy that we also have here among submitted games, something more conceptional.
And I think it would be very cool to put it on a big projection in gallery room!
BTW. You made it by particle effects?