THE GOOD (what i liked, and what stood out for me):
I liked the idea for the game, and the link implementation was well made. The dungeon levels, unlike other games, were well thought out and I was able to cross quite a few levels with a manageable amount of difficulty that allowed the game to be tested to its full capability. The game is bug-less and also has a good amount of interesting mechanics. Well done!
THE BAD (what i disliked, the bugs, and other problems):
As said earlier, pretty much no bugs! But I felt like the game itself was incomplete. There is a lack of background-music, and the game feels very clunky in general, for example, with the deaths and vast majority of actions you make as the player. My recommendation is to include "game juice" to your game, such as particles, screen-shakes and some of the built in vfx, since it makes your game look much better (although admittedly something that is cliched among thousands of games in the jam)
THE HARSH (stuff that would just make the game better, usually just personal opinion, don't take it too heavily :D ):
The story was well thought out, but perhaps some sound effects and interesting dialogue could have worked too? Your idea, unfortunately, was not very unique and done by the vast majority of the other submissions, at least it was executed well! Also ADD A LOGO TO YOUR GAME!!!
OVERALL: A decent, dungeon explorer with interesting mechanics, a good 4,3,4!
