THE GOOD (what i liked, and what stood out for me):
An enjoyable, quick, little explorer, with awesome dialogue. Will be telling that 0 8 joke for generations to come! The story-line of the game is quite unique to other games I've played, and although I see from the description that it wasn't something too serious, I highly recommend making this into a full game! Mr Pfebonba would be proud! that would be the meme-ing of life! Alright, besides the story, i found the art excellent and the grid like movement actually quite enjoyable when traversing the terrain, a well made game!
THE BAD (what i disliked, the bugs, and other problems):
Unfortunately, there was a lack of sound effects, I believe firmly that having some sounds for the character text, such as those in Undertale, would have made the game more impactful, e.g the guy in the right of the bar when he doesn't say the joke, his regular voice could have been played deeper or something. Besides that, maybe some music?
THE HARSH (stuff that would just make the game better, usually just personal opinion, don't take it too heavily :D ):
Add more story-line, make it longer!