I always really enjoy your work, and this looks like it'll turn into something great when you get chance to polish it up. The story feels interesting, and the art is great as always - I like the bird animations in the platformer segments.
I had a lot of issues getting input to work - I have a gamepad connected to my PC and when I unplugged it the input started to work. It might be worth seeing if some of the other folks are having the same issue.