"tries to look away, beginning to feel aroused in spite of herself as {^both of your:your} bodies entwine."
"quickly edging toward her peak as {^both of your:your} bodies entwine."
"You come across a pair of thugs bullying a bystrander." <-- bystrander -> bystander
"No, after I was kidnaped" <-- kidnaped -> kidnapped
When I rescued a bystander and asked for a material reward, they gave me a weapon and I'm 99.9% certain I added it to my backpack but when I checked, it was nowhere to be found (including in my storage). I had over 40 weight remaining so that's not it.
Edit: The weapon appears in the party inventory screen that shows after a fight, but not anywhere in the mansion. It's the blue aura(?) dagger that gives +4 speed.
When hovering over the Headgirl job while someone else is already assigned to it, the tooltip has no background and the text is black so it's hard to read.
When I chose to return Tia, I left to town and it said "Wimborn [Deep Area]".
After I went back for my reward, I chose to decline the gold but I didn't get any extra communal room beds.