This is too deep.
I may be wrong with my interpretation but being someone who already wrote stories myself and released them in visual novel format (about 3 of them as of now), I can't avoid to think the story is part of you. I hope you're doing well otherwise, the writing in this one is very deep and well written. Despite of the default UI and missing audio along with minimalistic graphics, I got hooked with the writings. Good job for your first game. You will be doing great in the future for storytelling / narrative games. Well done. :)