This game was actually very interesting. I think it was very poetic (whatever that means) and I actually wanted to finish the game and to see what was gonna happen. Nothing happened in the end when you went to the right and that was a bit disappointing but otherwise the game experience was very nice and beautiful. Great idea!
Maybe a bit more gameplay but I understand that you didn't have time with your 12 hours.
If you wouldn't mind I would like you to rate and play my game cause its in desperate need of some ratings :()