Recommendation: don't start with a wall of backstory. I know many do it, but not bc it's good, rather bc it is easy. It's very poor narrative, and also completely unnecessary. All the info comes naturally in the story when relevant, sometimes with just a lil tweak.
Yeah, I agree. I already plan to remaster ep1 and I want to do away with the disposition as the beginning and slowly put the information into the first episode. I have no writing experience and this is my first attempt so I'm learning as I go. I know it's pretty dumb to try to start with a story like this. But hey, we learn from our mistakes. Thanks for the recommendation. I hope you enjoyed the game.