the dialogue, art, and story are all good (a little dry for me because I don't understand the military lingo) but honestly, it was really boring to sit through. There wasn't enough to do in between the cut scenes, would have been nice to shoot down the enemies attacking the base, or solve a puzzle to get comms up and running. Not to mention, at the very end it frozen and there was no ending! Just froze on the date, which was a disappointment. This all sounds harsh, but just being honest. It needs a lot of work, but dialogue & story is something that most people don't do well, & you did, so props there for sure! Keep up the good work!