I've been going through your notes and two things have me puzzled:
- GIVE and SHOW are two entirely different actions. The former implies a tranfer of an object. The latter does not. SHOW <something> TO CLERK actually does produce a custom response. So, what were you getting at here?
- The "Hmmm, let's stop and consider this." paragraph is not redundant as the bouncer doesn't say anything unless you talk to him or ask him about something. What did you do to think that the same thing had already been said twice immediately beforehand? And his response does change, depending on circumstances.