I loved the artstyle and music. Writing itself was mediocre at best, worst part about it was that narrative was very patronizing, it tried to needlessly explain everything as if player was clueless stump of wood with zero logical capabilities (just like those horrible hollywood movies) - one of many examples: "Cecil knew that her red eyes could tell her real nature" coupled with "That red-eyed woman in the forest hut" where we, players already can see she has red eyes and can put 2 and 2 together ourselves and figure out that her eyes has to do something with her being labeled as witch - just made me frown from frustration.
Since this was your first game, i wish you the best and keep an eye out for needless explanations in the future since by doing that u're giving away big part of mistery that keeps the player/reader engaged.