So far it looks pretty good, I pretty excited to see what becomes of this game. Also I want to recommend putting a link to your Patreon on this page. I've seen other pages do it and maybe you'll get more traffic to your patreon. Also I saw some typos and unique grammar in the game, if someone has already point these out then disregard this, but if they haven't I'd like to send you an email or something for correcting them so your game can shine and flow more.
Last thing, you made wonderful designs, good job.