This game is so amazing! The artstyle, BG music and everything was great but the best part is that it's jam packed with content. The chapter itself I felt was a bit short but it was great. There were so many beautiful BGs, CGs and Sol is absolutely gorgeous and everything is so colourful and bright! I really liked that Sol was actually drawn instead of being just described as is the case in most VNs. The MC is nice and I like that you have the options to decide how you felt about your past and actually have a lot of choices that define your affection with the LIs without it being too obvious. The story was great too; the lore is built gradually instead of overwhelming you. As for the LIs, they seem to be quite intriguing but I can't pick a favorite yet!
As for the grammar and writing, for the most part it was fluent but there were a few errors here and there. Like in one place, there was a sentence "She said that putting a funny expression, rolling her eyes". Maybe saying "she put on a funny expression" or simply "she rolled her eyes while making a face" would have been more correct. Other than that there are a few spelling errors but for the most part it's fine. Anyway, I loved this and can't wait for the next chapter to be released!