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the end of Spencer's rought was way way to sudden. really disappointed that it ended that way so quickly. i feel like he was just pushed aside so you had more time to work on Richard's rought and that really hurts... you could've done so much more... and dont even get me started on the absolutely RIDICULOUS  "Bara Godmother" so much for not adding more females into this adventure... extremely disappointing. i really hope its worth the wait for Richard's rought to stabilize....

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I didn't add *more* females, since it's an embodiment of Maria.  You're really gonna hate when I add sprites for some other female characters.  Cause you know, women exist.


As for Spencer's ending...  I'm curious about why you feel that way about it.  It was built up to that point, and 35 days is what I've stated to be the ending point for routes, so I don't know where you get this idea of me pushing Spencer aside for Richard.  Spencer's ending was even the longest of the completed routes so far.  Perhaps you didn't get his best ending.  Who knows?

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that's exactly my point, you didn't make a new sprite you just gave maria a new dress to wear and a silly little wand. why would you do that instead of sticking with the theme of men? yes women exist but his game is meant to be for gay guys and making a "Baragodmother" represented as a woman just feels so out of place. you could've reused osar's sprite! hes so hot and would've been perfect. also im pretty sure i got the "best ending" even if im still not impressed. sure its cute that he proposes and sure we got to meet his family, and yeah he even fixed his relationship with his brother. but he never even got to recover. i was genuinely exited to play doubles alongside him in a tournament and train with him and see how far he could go. but instead of any of that i have to babysit him in a wedding then find out he bought a ring . it feels so rushed, again, especially considering his ankle still isnt fully healed before it ends.

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why would you do that instead of sticking with the theme of men?

There is no such theme. The VN featuring only gay romantic relationships is not at all the same as the game focusing exclusively on men.

. . .you just gave maria a new dress to wear and a silly little wand. why would you do that

Partly, because I made him do it. Several of the old patron rewards to add character outfits were mine, and for one of them I chose “Maria in a fairy godmother dress” because I thought it would be amusing to me. Which it is, because Maria is great and I like her more than half the male characters.

As for why he put the outfit there specifically—I can’t answer, but likely it’s because he needed to add it in somewhere where it would sort of fit into the story, and there aren’t a lot of places it could work.

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nice how it seems you made an entire account just to bitch about someones work. please be respectful about someones work and dont treat it like garbage because you dont like 1 or 2 things about it. 

im not "bitching" about it. im giving my opinion just because you don't like it doesn't mean im being disrespectful of his work.

your entire post was legit everything you hate about it in a hateful way. that isint having an opinion. that is bitching about shit that you think needs to be changed because you dont like it. be respectful of peoples work.

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Technically Dyne isn’t to blame for that one—he was obligated to include Fairy/Bara Godmother Maria somewhere because of a patron reward request from four years ago.

That said she is still completely awesome.

so? my point still stands. oscar isnt used nearly as often as he rightly should be and again, why use a female sprite for giving the gay OC a boyfreind instead of a man? it feels so out of place.we see maria all the time and never see oscar, its a shame because he has an amazing sprite.

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why use a female sprite for giving the gay OC a boyfreind instead of a man

Why use a male sprite instead of a female one? Any gender can perform that role adequately. A genderless robot could perform it. An inscrutable energy alien could perform it.

The fact that you’re a fan of Oscar doesn’t mean he deserves more screen time, and it especially doesn’t override Dyne’s contract obligations.

Your point is irrelevant.  Oscar is a side character and doesn't belong to me.  It's a cameo for a friend that put Chester as a cameo into his visual novel.  Of course I'm going to use my characters more than a cameo character.  On top of that, he was used to replace another character that I removed from the novel completely.  His sprite does look great, but his character has virtually no purpose.  He'll probably appear somewhere else, but Maria's character is far more important.

For the whole Spencer deal, unfortunately, his ankle isn't going to miraculously be better within the timeframe I set for myself to finish the route.  When he gets his epilogue though, it'll certainly be healed up for that.