I believe you recorded in Low Quality so it's very hard to evaluate details, however i have some quick notes:
- At 0:10 lines above the word "VIRUS LEVEL" and "MUSIC TYPE" are lost.
- The red shapes wrapping "SPEED", "MUSIC TYPE" are segmented. You should merge segmented pieces into one.
- At 1:0 the bottom right bar is all blurred.
Have you already tested the Dr Mario profile converted from V1?