It is difficult to provide the plot in such a span if you have a lot of it. It's easier to make the plot more character centric imo it'll feel more natural and the player would be far more invested.
I'll try out your game for sure!
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Yes, I agree. I have characters in the center of attention, but I also tried to reveal the local setting as much as possible. These are quite interrelated things.
This is my first completed game in 3.5 months of experience in Rpg Maker. Therefore, along the way, I also have to learn a lot of things. Including parallax mapping, which I used to try to avoid. But now I realized that the technical framework of the editor is too constraining for me :)
I hope you will like my game, at least in terms of the atmosphere, which I put the greatest emphasis on. An opinion about the game, even negative with arguments, is welcome :)
I will also try to play your game and the games of other participants in my free time. Time to apply my meager knowledge of English :D