Okay, so, I played a bit of it and I love it!
The story tugs a bit at my heart string, the mapping is great if not a bit inconsistent, the sound and some art design has some rough patches, but it's overall good!
But sadly, I don't think I can finish playing the game without ending up developing hard feelings for it x'D
Why? Well, I've always been a slow person, so I end up failing the gathering stars part a lot. It's really frustrating, especially having to remember where all the levers and stars are. My brain ain't loving it. I had to stop the moment I got motion sickness, lol.
Maybe consider lengthening the time? Or implement a difficulty system?
Other than that, other issues I have are minor and nit picky, like punctuation stuff regarding commas, lol. I love my commas--
But yeah, I'd gladly play the game again once the gathering stars timer is implemented better for people like me. Looks like I'm in the only one struggling tho, oop x'D
Overall, as far as a game jam submission goes, I'll give it a 4 out of 5!
Great job, Finn! Doubly excited to play your other games now ^w^)/