I finally got to playing your game fully. I decided to go a bit differently from how I would usually and tried seeing what would happen if I gave incorrect dreams to the kids. I ended up getting a really sad ending. Good job pulling my heart strings. :(
I did find some minor bugs:
- I noticed the curtain in the opening cutscene has a hole in it on the left side, I could see the star and flashing through it
- the portal that appears after you first meet the sandman can be interacted with from any angle, so when I interacted from the back it made me walk out of bounds (not a game breaking though since it teleported me normally)
- the star jar doesn't have direction fix on, so it changes sprite when interacted from a different direction
Great game with some fun gameplay, the time limit was just perfect for me and kept the tension going. :D