So some thoughts:
The fog really covers a lot of the action sometimes.
One of the sheep is pretty clearly glitched. You can sheer it when it doesn't have any wool and it just disappears.
The timers for the rooms are a bit long and can't be skipped, especially if you are exploring to find out what the rooms require. Might be nice to add an early skip if the player wants to leave.
Seems a bit redundant to have to ask if you want to give the dream twice.
The star map area is a bit annoying to get through with all the back and forth, especially after the first time going all the way through.
The forest area has all sorts of passability/layering issues.