This one went by way too fast for me.
I agree. I'd like 1 more repeatable scene for each woman too. Maybe a new elf slave too.
I want to see how deep Ashley's new story arc goes.
Vannessa's activism is a little too redundant for me not specifically because of the story but because of the recent political issues in the US.
Runey, kudos to you for your extremely creative mind. You're actually creating real compelling stories for each character, with setting lore to match and cross overs. Your own universe. Do you write it all yourself?