You already know that I'm a fan! The graphics have that certain style to them, and I love the fact, that it's story oriented. The polishing is remarkable, and it seems to be free from glitches. It's a really fun game. Actually, in terms of fun, it surpassed the game it's modelled after.
To point something out:
- I'd like some more music - I think it would do good to give different music for either the title screen or the level.
- You should probably add a room that introduces the "look around" mechanics. Right now, they're only there, without any use whatsoever.
Do the chapter 2 already, the game is polished enough!