Well I think you did a wonderful job and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. I'm sharing the story with friends in hopes of it connecting with them in its own way. We all have our story to tell and I think your story hits a variety of angles to make people think. Mental health is all about working through thoughts in a healthy manner. We can't run from our concerns all the time so it's important to face them in a constructive and beneficial manner