8/10 I like the plot of the story. I was actually halfway part yet and I'm glad I found this game. I'll rate it as 8 not because it's bad but because it has a room to improve. The game hasn't established the full lore, needs more art for clothes and some part of story are just vague but definitely a good story as if the author put his whole effort and heart into it. I hope my 8 doesn't let you down but as a strength to improve and expand this game or even a new work of yours.
I know it's not right to judge it when I'm not done playing it but I have to because you've just finished your work and I don't want to be late for this review.