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oh, i nearly missed this feedback also! thank you so much for taking the time to type all this out - and the details of your experience too, wow. i will surely go over this multiple times as i continue working. 

although the presence of the player is known to the voice and he does enjoy poking you here and there while narrating in the informal release, im sure he will behave and keep his fingers to the nameless servant in the final iteration.

thank you again for your time and kind attention.

And thank you for writing such a captivating story. It was quite a dark horse of an entry! (apologies if I laid it on a bit thick with the critique, it reads a bit more blunt than I had intended)

not at all, i am very grateful! in fact your critique has helped me come up with a first draft for a description of the VN :)