Hey d!
As with all of your work, I'm astounded by the beauty you bring to the table. It always takes me a second to get over the WOW and get to the meat of it, lol.
I wouldn't necessarily call this game "fun," because (maybe i was just moving hella slow) it was difficult to read (intentionally so) and slow-paced. That said, I think it's a necessary and honorable text-sculpture to honor the "death"/grief of the short story that will never be.
Curiosity was my strongest feeling while moving through these fragments. I wanted more, and knew I'd have to be satiated with what I was given. It left me with a sense of longing and grief that wasn't at all unpleasant.
I also really enjoyed all the ways you played with structure, linearity, and echo. The echoes were given form, the museum was transfixed in moments, sensations, not images, and I think this piece taught me a bit how to be content with my hunger. Which I think is what you were trying to do, for narrow are the vessels! Thanks for this, d.
And thanks for joining the Discord! It's been great just chatting with everyone.
Here's a lil playthrough vid, so you can see live feedback. It actually crashed halfway through so it got cut short, and I apologize for that! But it's already 19 minutes so I figured it was enough.