GOOD EVENING,
I Liked the concept which you have proposed in the game. It is a simple, foolish, and fun experience. However I do believe there are a few steps needed in development to which would make the game more immersive. Perhaps taking time to design and implement character models instead of the spinning coin feature. I found the clues disorienting as who actually appeared to have murdered Lady Baguette. Considering they were all present during the slashing, it would have been more interesting to have had to think of who the murderer was if clues of all the deaths were left for the investigator, instead of testimonials. Despite a foolish tone, there should be some relation to reality in actually police procedure. It was fun and a short experience. If you continue a game series with this, I would like to see a longer narrative just because it was enjoyable with the little time spent on Bread Edition.