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Hi incorrigible! First off thank you SO MUCH for playing so many of these games and giving awesome thorough feedback. You seriously rock and I'm grateful for your presence here. And welcome to your first game jam!

This game was fun once we were finally able to start playing. In hindsight it would have been easier to print and cut the cards, but I just used a deck and had to search the 5 deck PDFs for each card. It was especially tedious because they weren't organized by suite or anything, but we got there eventually! This if anything made me want to quite (just a simple out-of-loop failure that would have been avoided altogether had we just printed to cards). 

I played the 2 player one, and the instructions were unclear (?) at the onset so we ended up both picking a card and revealing it at the same time for the refrain. Our refrain was the very poetic "before through" 😂This made us both laugh and smile, a happy accident of the game. I honestly was impressed with the end result as well — I was a bit skeptical of a coherent poem forming, just because I felt like my hand was more nouns than verbs, but it came out pretty neat:

before through
gender, my mirror
wed honor as
success. object so
one solve(s) rapture

The companion pieces made this feel extremely fleshed out! Not only are they marvelously written, they add a narrative element to it that builds the world for me. I got pulled in. While I've never read Shadowgraphs, now I want to. 

Overall I loved this as a poetic experience, and am very impressed by the ingenuity it must have taken to make. Very well done!

P.S. I don't think I have time to record myself playing the solo on today (before voting closes), but I'm going to try to do it next week, when I have more time!

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It was my pleasure, hehe! Thank you for getting such a cool group of people together.

-- Oh god, I'm so sorry for the hassle searching through the PDFs for each card's term must have been for you. When I was making them I got kind of carried away with the idea of submitting these sheets as five separate poems of their own, since "Fish" and "Sevens" show how each rank and suit, respectively, is a poem, but if there's anything I've learned in this game jam, it's to focus on making the content as playable/approachable as possible from the get-go! I'll include a reference file where people can check what each suit/rank combination corresponds to in a future version, and an (out-of-character?) guide on how to put your own deck together.

In the "Ghazal" game, I'd envisioned people picking the refrain consciously (so, not blindly -- Player A would put something down, and then Player B would find the card in their hand that they felt went best with it), but I really like how you guys did it! A clearer instruction manual (possibly with diagrams? lol) is something I'll include in future versions, too. I'm glad you guys liked the poem you came up with; I find the deck generates very friendly/subversive things relative to its source text. (You mentioned you want to read "Shadowgraphs," and while I adore Either/Or more than almost any other book, the whole thing's a bit of a slog and "Shadowgraphs" in particular can read misogynistic. If you end up checking it out, please let me know! I could talk about that book forever.)

And oh my gosh, it's so kind of you to offer recording yourself playing! In lieu of that, we can play a round ourselves over Discord using a key for which terms go with which cards and an emulator like this one, if you like -- just let me know!

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I'd love to!! Let's chat about it when you can