Thank you for the critique, Coalfire! I appreciate the thought that you put into helping me make the game better.
For a first attempt this is some great work! I'll give you a follow to keep up with anything you might release in the future. Also, do you have a dev-branded twitter account for Jellyfish Ink? I keep up with a lot of devs that way and it's a great way for me to notify them about videos I've done on their games.