Alright so, first off, you should really remove the fact that you have to wait a lot of time before being able to complete a notebook, makes the gameplay really annoying and ruins it; it could be ok for the first game, but not forever.
Second, The Test is terrible during night, meanwhile in the original game, you would still see something, in this mod, you can't mostly see anything, and if The Test catches you, then you just have to hope that Baldi isn't near you, because otherwise it is a 100% death, and no, the little lights around the school will not save you, because you would still not able to see baldi and coordinate enough to go around the school.
What I suggest is to make it's effect lighter so that it still allow you to see something, or maybe it would be better to just go straight and delete the character.
This is what I wanted to suggest for now.