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Dear LeChroniqueur,

I played your game and, in spite of looking kinda simple, I really enjoyed.

I just created this account to tell you (and also help you) about what bothers me the most: Grammar. 

I know that you are not an english native speaker (neither am I). You are probably french, I see.

Well, some important tips:

When you use the auxiliary verb "did" (or "didn't"), the main verb does not need to be in the past.

example:

Wrong: I didn't thought about that

Correct: I didn't think about that

Other tip: "Thoses" doesn't exist. The word "those" is already plural of "that".

Singular: That person

Plural: Those persons

I understand your plural logic, my native language also came from Latin (romance language?).

Another tip: Some english adjectives end with ful and not full. The correct suffix is ful. It is beautiful, thankful, grateful, and not beautifull, gratefull, thankfull. 

I wish you success. 

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Hi thank you for the tips !

And I am also happy to hear that you liked the game ^^