Thank you for taking the time to give me such a thorough review of my submission for the contest. Disappointed that the game experience didn't live up to expectations, but in the end I expected it. My last minute choices to turn the game into a demo (due to lack of time to propose something more or less accomplished) will have finally penalized the game. And having played it again a few days later, I totally agree with the above remarks. ^^
As this was my first demo (game) on RPG Maker that I made publicly available, and moreover for a contest, I was apprehensive about where to place myself among the multitude of talented creators of the community. So I take your comments as gold to be able to improve again and propose a better final version of this game. In any case, it was a great experience and I don't regret having participated.