I kind of expected more, I am disappointed a bit.
So the problems is the first the story abruptly ends and what is there is no character development to anyone yet, they all are casually asking this man to pull down his pants. Some people could mistake Linda as a child there is almost no info because she has no character. Same with Raury with the old patch who is a child like, I know short stacks are attractive to but the writing literally confirmed she is a child.
Second the combat, I learned it after trial and error it is boring because nothing unique other than timing and button to the critical point that does 1 shot with a bat that cost $100 dollars and spamming dexterity training.
Third what relationships are they trying to portray, it is confusing there no dialogue just a massage option this random person we don't get to know all we do get to is she likes to play with a bunch of adult toys, like the main character's oldest sister which we learned from the youngest sister. Not to mention the weird oldest sister hating our guts because the father wasn't there probably because she wanted to get smashed by his huge dong, only reason why the mother married him btw.
The art is good but confusing on the sex, it's like your cumming at every thrust. As well as most characters here have the same body... and face...Backgrounds are great though and when they are finished being colored it would look even better.
My opinion but what do you guys think?