Right off the bat I like the backgrounds and anime looking busts, nice art. Morgan has a Naruto look to him. I like the ability to pick certain options at certain times in the dialog. This has a little bit of a choose your own adventure feel, but it's still different.
The music and sound effects are very quiet. It's hard to hear anything unless you crank it up, but as soon as you crank it up, WHAM loud battle music hits you. Ultimately this is an issue where the tracks need to be normalized closer together in volume.
The battle system is an interesting take on a first person and while not really a bad combat system it does a few things wrong in my opinion. Allowing the giant snakes to heal only serves to pad the game and make the fights take longer, and forces the player to consume more items. I'd completely remove the healing from the snakes. It just doesn't make sense for them to heal for 50, or at all really.
Onigiri should heal for 50% because it's often a waste of a turn at only 35% max HP recovered.
The story writing is really good, even in the battles.
This game is a weird breed of visual novel mixed with a choose your own adventure book and a slice of first person RPG, all wrapped in a kaiju themed anime style experience. Even though it sounds odd... it's not bad. :)
Thank you for participating in this game jam. I found this game to very weird and different, but in a good way. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what you're working on next.