Hey I really enjoyed reviewing this game - here are my thoughts:
- Nice, slick design and graphics - really adds to the flavor
- Rolling - a little confusing - you start with a d6 but if you advance the skill you can roll a d8?
- Character Origins - love to know more about how each of these is different from the other - I gleaned a bit from the names (ie: Homo Machinus = Cyber) but maybe a sentence or two that describes each would be helpful.
- Adrenaline Rush is a great mechanic - very realistic
- Explosive Collars - that's a twist - love to see more about how those affect gameplay
All in all a cool 24XX concept that I would playtest anytime. Nice work!