Ok so I am gonna be very blunt here, you have seriously nailed a Perfect Perfect Story here. Yes there are a few Grammar errors but honestly not that bad. An there's not really a lot of sex scene's but the story alone is just Great even without them. This is a True Master Piece and if this is the type of work you do. Hell I'd pay $25 or $50 a month for this. You have really outdone yourself. Keep up the work and I can't wait to see how it progresses.