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You all brought a children's book to life for your game jam? This looks incredible! Well done.

I never got past the spinning plates section. The game was a bit too difficult for me to be able to manage things outside my periphery. I think the rate that the borders slowed down as they got close to the timing made it difficult to time them correctly unless you're looking directly at it. Also, the description mentions lights showing how well you're doing, but I wasn't able to see any lights showing the status. I just sorta... failed every time around the same time. 

I think the readability of the icons could be improved. Unless you're staring directly at them, they blend into the background. More contrast would help players take in more information outside their immediate focus and make it easier to see what they actually have to respond to. I felt I could do each task individually, but I was doing the other effectively blind. 

Overall, really cool game, great execution and presentation. Great job team!

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Thank youuu :3 Definitely could improve on the UI in the next round, happy you enjoyed it!