Hi there!
First of all, your game looks really good and the cover got me to click on it. But i have some feedback that might help you improve this or your future games:
1. The tutorial. I thought the tutorial was already part of the game, only when i saw that there was a font that said level 1 i realised that the game only begins. This is no big issue but is caused by other issues that i will explain now.
2. The tutorial is to complicated, unclear and overall not the best way to teach players how to do things. There's too much text and you don't know where to look first. And
3. Don't teach the player everything at once. There are so many mechanics that seem really cool, but it would have been much better if you introduced them to the player one after another, and first try to get the full potential out of a mechanic over the course of several levels before moving on to the next one.
I would really, reall recommend you to watch this video:
I know your game is very different to Mario but i still think it will help you with making tutorials in your level.That said, i really hope my feedback helped you and it would be cool if you could check out my submission too. Thanks! :)