A really solid entry! It shows that you don't need a """deep""" narrative and can do really well with a simple story and a good interactive structure. The quite brisk prose was really easy to read and got out of the way of enjoying said structure, and so at no point did it sag and become a challenge to stay engaged with, which is a problem I've found in other entries. (Not that I'm too harsh on them for it, there's very little time to edit these things and address those problems).